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Short Story-Homecoming
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Short Story-Homecoming
Just noticed the author has put a short story 'Homecoming' about Richard Bolitho, set after the Battle of the Nile on his website.
Edit: The story is now available to be read on my site, by kind permission of the author, at http://www.historicnavalfiction.com/index.php/general-hnf-info/short-stories/915-homecoming
Edit: The story is now available to be read on my site, by kind permission of the author, at http://www.historicnavalfiction.com/index.php/general-hnf-info/short-stories/915-homecoming
Last edited by Astrodene on Tue 29 Sep 2009, 14:16; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : Provide viewing link)
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Re: Short Story-Homecoming
A nice story. A thoughtful Commodore (Richard) Bolitho returns to England after action at Aboukir Bay, but the story is not without suspense and action.
This from Page 10: ...the usual sense of guilt and shame, which he had often suffered in the aftermath of cloth action...
Is "cloth action" a term I don't know, or is this a typo for close action?
This from Page 10: ...the usual sense of guilt and shame, which he had often suffered in the aftermath of cloth action...
Is "cloth action" a term I don't know, or is this a typo for close action?
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I read "close action" on first reading - didn't even notice what I now assume to be a typo. Perhaps he dictated it and he has a lisp ... 
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I guess you're right, but I was hoping for some new exotic explanation. Maybe clergy -- you know, men of the cloth -- having at it in a pitched battle. Or maybe a towel-snapping battle. I'm disappointed that "cloth action" isn't a technical term for a surprise manoeuvre: "They didn't cotton that they were linen to starboard because we had pulled the wool over their eyes..." 
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Or perhaps if the Marines run out of amunition they throw hammocks at the opposing ship 
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Maybe Make & Mend day revealed something that should have been kept to himself ... 
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You go too far, Sir! You may well blush! 

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Re: Short Story-Homecoming
This story is now available for viewing directly from my site by kind permission of the author. I have edited the link in the first post
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