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Short Story - The Fireship
by Astrodene Thu 13 Aug 2009, 16:56
The author has made a short story available on his website
Edit: The story is now available to be read on my site, by kind permission of the author, at http://www.historicnavalfiction.com/index.php/general-hnf-info/short-stories/1145
Edit: The story is now available to be read on my site, by kind permission of the author, at http://www.historicnavalfiction.com/index.php/general-hnf-info/short-stories/1145
Last edited by Astrodene on Tue 29 Sep 2009, 14:09; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : add viewing link)
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Re: Short Story - The Fireship
by reb01501 Thu 13 Aug 2009, 19:22
Yes, I read it and it demonstrates the proofreading deficiencies I talked about in my review of the novels. Still, it's a good read.
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Re: Short Story - The Fireship
by conaghan Fri 14 Aug 2009, 13:34
Thanks for posting it - - proved to be a nice diversion, reading it at my desk at lunch time yesterday. 
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Re: Short Story - The Fireship
by Astrodene Tue 29 Sep 2009, 14:12
reb01501 wrote:Yes, I read it and it demonstrates the proofreading deficiencies I talked about in my review of the novels. Still, it's a good read.
The author tells me "The short story was written on a weekend and posted but the work has never been edited by anyone." It is now available for viewing on my site and I've edited the link in the first post.
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Re: Short Story - The Fireship
by reb01501 Tue 29 Sep 2009, 16:34
I wonder if he would object to an attempt to make a first pass at proofing it?
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Re: Short Story - The Fireship
by Astrodene Wed 30 Sep 2009, 15:09
If you wish to have a go at doing the editors job for free he has no objection though any changed version should not be made public without prior approval
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Re: Short Story - The Fireship
by reb01501 Wed 30 Sep 2009, 15:44
Seeing that he has allowed us the pleasure of reading it for free, I'm not averse to taking an hour or so to proofread it. I just wanted to be sure he would not be put off or insulted by it. Shall I use the email address on his website to send him the result?
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Re: Short Story - The Fireship
by Astrodene Wed 30 Sep 2009, 16:01
That would be best, just say you did it as per his coversation with me
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